This outcome is not just about editing. It covers a variety of topics that modify the main core of an argument. It'll include things like changing the structure of writing, how entire ideas are formed, and how sections complement another. Revising is the last really important step for every big writing assingment.
Best Artifacts
The two best artifacts for this outcome are the two drafts for the Research Paper. It'll directly show you the before and after on how my writing developed. Revision is shown throughout the entire process, but it was the most important near the end. Every time I made a new draft, such as I went back and corrected some of the structure. The outcome was important midway through the research here, since it enabled me to shape where my writing went. The strongest display of revision is in the because of how much I corrected. I based the revisions off of a bunch of feedback. The feedback my instructor gave me was incredibly valuable. It showed a lot just getting this new look at it from an experienced writer. Without this, the paper would of likely been less coherent and strong. I revised entire sections of my introduction and literary review to correctly reflect my discussion about AI. This simply proves how important revision is, it can sometimes make or break a paper since it really compacts the entire essay into one free flowing discussion.
